TUTORIAL TIME !!! ow yeah your favourite part of the pack has just arrived nightstalker s tutorial series today we are going to talk to you about writing skills writing is not difficult !! but you must remember crucial points when making an infofile !!! i ll give you examples of how it shouldn t and i ll show you how to correct it i m not going to complain about typing errors but structural stuff as an example i m going to use an infofile of a group i won t mention so all names of sceners and group are made unrecognisable (by putting question marks) ERROR 1 --------- this is the first error ! read the following bit very carefully !!! group Because most other members got bored with riloxy too they left so these are pretty chaotic times for Trilox F gave me the coordination of the vga-artists but didn t supply me with the info concerning the vga-members from that time I decided to kick every vga-artist and to keep those who kept in contact with me so the memberlist is gonna be a short one believe it or not but this is actually 1 (one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) sentence FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR too long!!! a good way to correct it is by putting dots at following places so these are pretty chaotic times for Trilox concerning the vga-members from that time therefore I decided this was simple was it on to the next error ERROR 2 --------- What happened the last half year Well a fucking lot In July we attended Wired 97 where yclops got 10th place in the pixel-compo and 9th place in the raytrace compo In September we attended Bizarre 97 Cy lops got 1st place in the pixel-compo and 4th place in raytrace compo At the end of October yclops went to Saturne 5 with Itsar and Ku t Gree The party was a disaster 1 major ^---- hhahaha kut !!!!!! (dutch joke!) powerfailure so nothing happened there In November W ld Th ng s Wired 97-Bizarre 97 report featuring code by Infinit Rebo t Gfx & Design by Cyclop and music by 08 got released after much delay So check it out and discover the Trilo y crew in action A couple of days after the release of this report Speed- frea left riloxy and took most of the artist with him to start a new group Thora also decided to make his music division a seperate group what will happen to the coding division is still unknown so the future of Trilox is still an uncertain one there are two things wrong here !!! first about every sentence contains the name of a scener (notice s) most of the time it s even the same person !! (cycl ps) this could be avoided by using things like that same person that very same cool guy or even more simple HE ! second in your info file try to be as precise as you can be !!! Cyclop mentioned all the parties he had gone to except lowres 97 why simple he got last ( ATB RULED OVER Tr loxy at that party) !! PS i don t want to rub it in your face anymore that i got 3rd mmm fuckit i got third hahahahahahahahahahaha )))))))))))))))))) -) -) ) raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah gggggggggggggggggggggg hihihi on to the next error ERROR 3 --------- So you want to apply as a gfx-artist Then there are some things you have to know First mail some of you re stuff and you re info to me Cy lops_tri oxy@hotmail com We will then judge if you re in or not Those Photoshop-Logo- Artists don t bother We won t accept you unless you show some real skill handling the brush in photoshop and you can produce art without the use of those fucking filters ----- little note look at the previous sentence then read it again and look for dots or comma s ! you didn t find any take a look at error 1 if you don t know what to do next ! Second You ll have to send me at least 1 picture every 2 months you can miss a pack if you ve got a good reason but if you miss a second pack you re out! third If you enter a compo we want the original compo- version with signature don t make any modifications afterwards also mention the party and you re ranking Finally If we notice that one of our members is ripping from other artists he gets kicked no exceptions! okay this is a version of error 2 ! cyclop says If you enter a compo we want the original compo- version with signature don t make any modifications afterwards also mention the party and you re ranking he altered his own (lowres) picture therefore he made modifications afterwards! ofcourse he didn t mention the party and the place he got in the infofile ( he got last thorax atb ended 4th and i (nightstalker) ended 3rd ) his picture was C -WANDA LBM go see it in the trilox -pack ! mmm yeah explain the following sentence he gets kicked no exceptions! )! i ll give you a hint he gets kicked no exceptions! NOT REALLY AN ERROR BUT COOL !!! Greets All former Tril xy members To bad it didn t work out uel our broters in arms R velation Cool terminal part in milkshake loved it tsari Keep those demos coming put belgium on the map! reen same for you guyz more demos more BS - ATB Keep up the boozing and keep on releasing crap! Qua Flipping number 1 Dutchies! Those we forgot sorry the chaotic situation in T iloxy at the moment has caused us to forget most groups and we appologize for this ____________ this part i like ))) SOMETHING TO END WITH --------------------------- take a look at this If you have questions about vga mail yclops -- original If you have questions about vga mail -- how i understood it ) If you have questions about vga mail Cyclop -- correction of the mistake The end C clops riloxy 11 97 THE END -------- i hope you all have learned something from this ofcourse such crappy newsletters occur only with beginning groups so don t worry too much )))) PS if you could understand the names of the sceners or groups it s not my fucking fault !!!! ( you are just a buttfox0r in that case ) nightstalker atb